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Ayanna

Ayanna

Painting Painting \ Uncategorized | 05/31/03 @478 | Diamant | Comments critiques (21) | Views views (4253)


Ayanna
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This is my first full 2d painting. I hope you all like it. done with Photoshop 7
 
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Avatar nikko

 05/31/03 @490

very nice background! She has a wonderful face, but maybe she's a bit off balance?!
 
Elantriell

 05/31/03 @523

Beautiful!
I love the soft colors you'v used in here and her face is indeed very pretty.
 
Avatar TJVerhagen

 05/31/03 @536

beautiful indeed! good job!
 
Avatar ChrissyK

 05/31/03 @595

Very nice! The sky is beautiful and the colors are really pretty.
 
Avatar shadowgirl

 05/31/03 @636

that sky is really wonderful, but it makes me wish there was something more going on in the foreground.. like some flowers or some pattern in the ground. I love her back and shoulders, you did a great job with that.
 
PhilipStraub

 05/31/03 @685

This is really quite good. I love the lighting and the color key on this. I agree that the composition does sem a little lacking, it just needs a little something on the right of the figure to balance it out. Phenomenal job for a first photoshop painting..can't wait to see what you do next.
 
fatih

 05/31/03 @698

She is very beautiful. If i see a girl like this, i'm sure i wont let her pass by.
 
Avatar ChrisThatGuy

 05/31/03 @779

Hmmmm, very nice. I like how overall you use a limited colour palette, but you have a lot of subtle variation throughout the piece.

I agree with PhilipStraub that it's lacking something to the right of the figure, but I don't think it needs to be an actual object. Your clouds draw attention to her elbow and the back of her head, but if you change them a little you could draw attention to her face and shoulder more. Then if you tone down the clouds and highlights on the left side, it would bring more emphasis to the figure's right.

Very nice technique.
 
HenceMyName

 05/31/03 @783

From aside of what everyone said about the crits.

Superb job!
 
PictoKid

 06/01/03 @508

i like it, looks very nice, but then overall looks abit empty =)
mayb thats just my personal viewpoint
anyway nice work, hope to c more works from u
 
prm

 06/01/03 @619

This is really beautiful! And I don't agree with the persons above - I think it's perfectly balanced and beautifully executed. Very nice work!
 
Diamant

 06/01/03 @950

thanks for all the comments! i'm glad for the most part everyone likes the piece.. i've definetly been getting mixed reviews on her. pretty much all the comments you guys have been saying. I guess I really need to put more thought into the overall composition. I did this pretty quick without really thinking too much.. like i said.. i'm not really used to 2d.. for my next piece however i will definetly take everything said into account and hopefully make something even better! thanks again everyone! by the way..i updated the image thanks to the comments here.. I hopefully fixed the ballancing issue.. thanks for that! and ChrisThatGuy.. very interesting thoughts about the clouds drawing attention to her elbow and back of the head.. i think i'm gonna play around with that and try what you said.. thanks!
 
Avatar ChrisThatGuy

 06/02/03 @216

I hope it works out. You have a really nice rendering style, and with a little tweeking you could get a really big impact out of your works.
 
Serena

 06/03/03 @213

Very beautiful, the details in the hair and the clouds are gorgeous!

From her knees up it has a very beautiful compostion, but the bottom of the picture looks like it could be more detailed. The bottom of her dress looks kind of weird... like it's been gathered slightly right at the bottom, which I've never seen in a dress. It almost looks to sketchy. I'd make the dress longer and have it drape gently on the ground so you can add some little wrinkles and define it more. Also, while there is nothing wrong with the railing, I think you could spice up the picture a bit more if it was at more of an angle towards the "camera," maybe by having it come closer to the picture plane on the right side. Just looks a little flat to me.

Sorry for the long critique.. you can still do way better than me *sweatdrop*
 
Sourpuss

 06/03/03 @214

Lovely sky. And an unusual character, too...what a muscular-looking back! Whee!

I like the little 'wave' in the railing, too...
 
Avatar AlphaEden

 06/03/03 @227

She's beautiful
 
Avatar jam

 06/03/03 @565

I love the sky! As everyone already mentioned, great job!
 
Avatar Redfox

 06/04/03 @289

This is your first 2d attempt? right thats it! I am using my graphics tablet as a cutting board from now on. - Your work is breathtaking for a first attempt.
- wouldn't want to take a fall from her balcony - looks bloody high up!

 
Morphyne

 06/04/03 @531

her hair.... wonderfully done
 
Avatar Q8Bone

 06/07/03 @470

WoW!! it's Really Wonderful :)
 
Avatar adamfrancuzik

 07/01/03 @404

Pretty frikin nice man!
 
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