Ayanna
Ayanna
Painting \ Uncategorized | 05/31/03 @478 |
Diamant |
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This is my first full 2d painting. I hope you all like it. done with Photoshop 7
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05/31/03 @490
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I love the soft colors you'v used in here and her face is indeed very pretty.
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I agree with PhilipStraub that it's lacking something to the right of the figure, but I don't think it needs to be an actual object. Your clouds draw attention to her elbow and the back of her head, but if you change them a little you could draw attention to her face and shoulder more. Then if you tone down the clouds and highlights on the left side, it would bring more emphasis to the figure's right.
Very nice technique.
05/31/03 @783
Superb job!
06/01/03 @508
mayb thats just my personal viewpoint
anyway nice work, hope to c more works from u
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06/03/03 @213
From her knees up it has a very beautiful compostion, but the bottom of the picture looks like it could be more detailed. The bottom of her dress looks kind of weird... like it's been gathered slightly right at the bottom, which I've never seen in a dress. It almost looks to sketchy. I'd make the dress longer and have it drape gently on the ground so you can add some little wrinkles and define it more. Also, while there is nothing wrong with the railing, I think you could spice up the picture a bit more if it was at more of an angle towards the "camera," maybe by having it come closer to the picture plane on the right side. Just looks a little flat to me.
Sorry for the long critique.. you can still do way better than me *sweatdrop*
06/03/03 @214
I like the little 'wave' in the railing, too...
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06/04/03 @289
- wouldn't want to take a fall from her balcony - looks bloody high up!
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